I don't have the story here to reread, but I think much of what makes that last line work so well is that whether or not it's in Quoquo's head is indeterminable. Nate. -------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <http://lists.urth.net/pipermail/urth-urth.net/attachments/20120909/1985b5c1/attachment-0003.htm>