(urth) Short Story 79: Kevin Malone

Marc Aramini marcaramini at gmail.com
Sat Aug 2 11:57:31 PDT 2014


Kevin Malone appeared in *New Terrors* in 1980 and is collected in *Endangered
Species*.

SUMMARY:  After getting married to Marcella in April, the narrator loses
his job by June and in desperation answers an ad calling for an attractive
young couple that brings them to The Pines, an estate imitating the palaces
of the Italian Renaissance.  They are greeted by a servant named Priest,
and though they do not meet the master, are given drinks and eventually
dinner.  When they retire, they are served by the staff at the Pines, and
in the morning the narrator is even shaved by his servant Bateman and finds
money in his pockets.  When he inquires if anything out of the ordinary
happened overnight, since they were in separate chambers, Marcella denies
it and fails to mention the money.  He is certain someone attempted
something with her and she did not protest, though given her later
straightforwardness, she doesn’t seem the type to conceal.   They live for
a time there masquerading as the masters of The Pines, until the weather
turns sour in October.

He puts his arm around Marcella and she reacts explosively, saying that
Priest is more of a man than her husband, revealing her materialistic
superficiality when she says, “If you want me, take me.  If this house is
yours, you can have me. We’ll send him to Vegas – or throw him on the dump.”
When the narrator threatens to throw Priest on the fire unless he can see
the master, Priest agrees, saying it was because of the narrator, not
Marcella.  Then “Kevin Malone” appears, with a gust of wind from the French
windows, and “night entered with him, and remained in the room for as long
as [they] talked”.  He immediate claims that the house owns him and reveals
that his father was the  man-of-all-work, and his mother the maid.  He
says, “I grew up here, washing the cars and raking leaves out of the
fountains.”  He admits that this is his attempt to recreate the world of
his childhood, and playing the part of house-owner had no appeal to him, so
he hires young couples to be the wealthy and handsome young pair in the
house, while he lives above the stables. Malone says that he was put in an
orphanage at 12 but always wanted to recreate The Pines of his childhood,
so through luck and industry he amassed a fortune, but found that being
master of the house did not serve his purpose, so he would play the part of
a servant, maintaining a fiction to create his own sense of home. The
narrator offers to stay, but Malone says that his fiction requires actors
who do not know what kind of role they are playing.

When the narrator asks why Malone had to enter the orphanage, he says it is
a local legend – and Priest tells him that the elder Mr. Malone, the
stableman, “murdered Betty Malone, who was one of the maids.  Or at least
he was thought to have … They never found a body and it’s possible he was
accused falsely.”  Malone adds that she was buried on the estate, and that
“they found bloody rags and the hammer, and he hanged himself in the
stable.”  When the narrator apologizes, Malone says that the maid was a
much younger tramp; these things happen.

In the morning the narrator packs his bags without assistance and says that
he saw his wife for the last time, with circles under her eyes but a steady
hand, dusting.  He ponders, “I have sometimes wondered if I were wholly
wrong in anticipating a ghost when the French windows opened.  How did
Malone know the time had come for him to appear.“

He reviews the case and finds no mention of a child, and seems to think
that the identical surnames of the victim and murderer were coincidental.  He
ends, “Sometimes I wonder if it is possible for a man – even a rich man –
to be possessed, and not to know it.”

COMMENTARY: There are two interesting themes present in “Kevin Malone”
which perhaps illustrate something of the rather complex ideology Wolfe
explores concerning freedom, service, and control.  Even though the couple
enjoys an easy existence, they cannot escape who they are – there is a
reason that “Marcella’s family had disowned her”, and that, even in
poverty, she is still “lying with her cocktail shaker on the chaise longue”.
Her entitlement continues at the estate, clear when she asserts that they
can “live like human beings” again there.  There is an immutability to the
character of the young couple that almost belies the idea of free will.  In
the static environment of The Pines, they are still jealous, quibbling, and
angry, though it seems they have very little to do save be themselves and
play the part of wealthy young couple.  However, the passing of summer
definitely escalates their discomfort, and perhaps the double death has
infiltrated the estate itself.

Malone rules like God – unseen and acting with a different set of
understandings than the couple who are expected to never seek concrete
answers to their masquerade.  However, the parallels with Malone and the
divine break down once he shows up with the angry wind from the windows and
we sense that he, too, is subject to the same unseen, determined control,
beyond his understanding. While Priest is the mediator between Malone and
the couple, he seems to fear the direct presence of Malone.

The repetition of the wind blowing in through the windows, equated with the
expectation of “a ghost, or some turbulent elemental spirit” and even with
“that pricking at the neck that comes when one reads Poe alone at night”
adds the supernatural hint to the story that cannot be ignored, though on
the surface the mundane nature of the plot remains free of science fiction.

Malone serves as a mouthpiece to all the themes at play: “You’re still
re-creating the life you had as a child, or trying to. … None of us can be
happy any other way, and few of us even want to try. … That’s right, you
can’t go home.  There’s one place where we can never go – haven’t you
thought of that?  We can dive to the bottom of the sea and some day NASA
will fly us to the stars, and I have known men to plunge into the past – or
the future – and drown.  But there’s one place where we can’t go.  We can’t
go where we are already.  We can’t go home, because our minds, and our
hearts, and our immortal souls are already there.”  Of course the immortal
soul at home over the stables is that of a murderer.

Even trying to live as a rich man gave Malone little satisfaction, and he
claims “Home is three rooms above the stables.  I live there now.  I live
at home, as a man should.” Yet the fiction of his servitude must remain
fiction: “Another owner would have wanted to change things … when I was a
boy this estate belonged to a fashionable young couple.  Suppose a man of
my age had bought it?  Or a young woman some whore. … The only actors who
can really do justice to their parts are the ones who don’t know what they
are.”  He is visibly agitated when he speaks of a young woman as a “whore”
here, and having his home above the stables certainly equates him with the
malevolent spirit of the first Kevin Malone.

THE MURDER:

The local legend runs that the stableman, Kevin Malone, murdered Betty
Malone, one of the maids, though “They never found the body, and it’s
possible he was accused falsely.”  Yet immediately the present Kevin Malone
says, “Buried her on the estate … They found bloody rags and the hammer,
and he hanged himself in the stable.” This is the same stable that Malone
claims was, and is, his home. Upon this statement, the wind whips the
drapes “like wine-red flags.” Malone says, “She was twenty years younger
and a tramp … Those things happen.” Of course this knowledge of her
whereabouts and the murder in general seem intimate, considering that there
was no corpse recovered, and the only witness, the elder Kevin Malone, hung
himself. Since the clippings make no mention of the child, it seems
possible that Malone himself is unreal, though it seems more likely, as the
Wolfe-wiki concludes, that he was a wealthy man who came into possession of
the house – perhaps even the child of the original wealthy homeowners,
though now he is possessed of the malevolent spirit of Kevin Malone.  However,
if he is in fact the wind spirit born of the death of the Malones, then
perhaps the recreation of “his” birth involves the same pattern of murder,
jealousy, and discontentment.

The twenty year age difference between Priest and Marcella echoes the
difference in age between the Malones.  Priest does claim that all of this
occurred “before his time”, so his identity and involvement seems second
hand.  He is, however, afraid to close the windows when Kevin Malone is
present, granting some credence to the idea that Malone is something like
an evil wind spirit. The death of the maid does not bode well for Marcella,
and if this Kevin Malone is a possessed man, perhaps his life, too, will be
caught up in the murderous and suicidal circle of repetition – another
actor who does not fully understand his role.

LITERARY ALLUSIONS:

“Kevin Malone” is fairly obvious in its references to the freeloading
Klipspringer in  *The Great Gatsby* and Poe in general, and while Marcella
seems every bit as decadent and inclined to alcoholism as the stereotyped
jazz age girl of money, that seems to be her natural character even before
coming to live at the house.  (However, the economy she displays with a
steady hand in dusting the Sevres porcelain figures with a steady hand
despite her immense hangover does seem to imply the spirit of the maid
Betty Malone at work).

It seems Thomas Wolfe’s *You Can’t Go Home Again* plays the part of the
wolf mention in this story in addition to its catch phrase nature in
Malone’s discussion of home.

NAMES:

While most of the names don’t seem to connote very much, that of Lloyd
Bateman, who shaves the master and whose name means grey boatman, certainly
does seem to resonate with some sinister crossing over imagery.

Marcella: the name means warlike and strong.  The Wolfe-Wiki also
claims, “Marcella
is the name of a saint, from a noble family in ancient Rome. She had been
rich but devoted herself to asceticism. She was martyred by being beaten to
death.”

Kevin means handsome by Birth, Malone means a servant or disciple of St.
John.

The Pines: the narrator speculates that estate was originally called La
Capanna (the hut or cabin) or Il Eremo (the hermitage or monastery).

Priest: the butler who serves as the intermediary between the couple and
the master – his name means exactly what it says, a priest of holy man.

Carter: the footman who holds the tray, his name means transporter of
materials.

The names on the picture include James Sutton (he who supplants, from the
south farm), Edna DeBuck (Edna means wealthy friend), Lloyd Bateman (grey
boatman).

The firm for which the narrator worked consisted of Jim Bruce (one who
seizes or supplants, the willowlands) who actually told him he was through,
Ketterly (while the meaning is unclear, an incompetent and importance
seeking practitioner of magic from C.S. Lewis’ Narnia books, who fails in
his ambitions), and Drake (snake or dragon).

RELIGIOUS ALLUSIONS: There really is a commentary in here somewhere about
servant and master that I think applies to God and the world.  In *Attending
Daedalus*, Wright picks up on some of the almost deterministic elements in
Kevin Malone – at first the lack of control and the determined behavior and
expectations of the narrator and his wife seems to jive with soft
determinism – everything is fine as long as they go along with it, but
later there is a hardness to it – they must be ignorant of the roles they
play for Malone to be happy, even though he never sees them directly, and
Priest reacts oddly to the question, “Will the master be able to see us?”
as if he can see them whenever they are in the house. The atmosphere Kevin
Malone tries to recreate is one that demands the ignorance of his actors.
The Wolfe-wiki mentions that the attempt to seek knowledge dooms them in an
almost Garden of Eden parallel, though from my point of view the
relationship was doomed and self-destructive even before the couple came to
the Pines.

It also claims, “There are religious hints in the butler named Priest, the
rose gardener, the lamb for dinner, etc.”

If the Pines was originally called Il Eremo, the monastery, then perhaps
Priest serves an unholy spirit (the holy spirit usually depicted as a
flame, and the threat of fire finally prompting the appearance of Kevin
Malone on the wind)

THE HOUSE AND THE WIND:

The house itself at several points seems to hold some sway: Malone says,
“this house owns me,” and Marcella stands straighter when she says, “It
owns me too.”  Since Betty Malone is buried on the estate and Kevin Malone
killed himself in the very stable that the current Kevin Malone claims as
his home,”the three rooms above the stable”, perhaps the estate itself has
attained something of a malevolent awareness.

Whether Kevin Malone is the name of the original master of the house is
open for speculation – the clean handkerchief the narrator finds in his
pocket was made of Irish linen, though the two being identified as man of
all work and maid preclude them from being the masters, one would assume.

There is definitely an association between the wind, the darkness of night,
and Malone, and his claim to grow up washing the cars and raking leaves
could very well resonate with a windy storm born of the murder –his
metaphorical father’s suicide and his mother’s murder mystically creating
him like an unholy spirit in their violent deaths, his childhood simply a
recreation, thus his accusation, “You’re still re-creating the life you had
as a child, or trying to”.

UNANSWERED QUESTIONS: What has the narrator done to lose his job? Is it
part of his aggressive character?  Are we to assume some kind of genetic
proclivity for self-destruction?

It seems that since Marcella is dusting and staying at the house at the end
that she has taken up the role of Betty Malone in her black dress, and that
since the narrator never sees her again, something rather permanent happens
to her.  She is approximately 20 years younger than the servant Priest, as
Betty Malone was 20 years younger than Kevin Malone.  Therefore, our
question should be – how is Priest involved in all of this?  There is a
moment, when Kevin Malone threatens him with being thrown in the fire, when
Priest asserts that “It was not the lady, sir.  It was you.  I want that
understood this time … I’m not doing this because of what she said.”  When
they first arrive, he says “Very well…” and is amused when they ask, “Will
your master be able to see us?” as if perhaps the master is all seeing.  Why
would the threat of fire impel Priest to bring the master, who immediately
enters with the wind?

CONNECTION WITH OTHER WORKS:
“Kevin Malone” is fairly straightforward as a possession story, and while,
much like “Suzanne Delage”, it can be read straight without the
supernatural element without truly affecting its theme, as a Wolfe story we
must expect that it is still fantasy, especially since it appeared in a
publication called *New Terrors*.  The large, self-sufficient but
ultimately unsettling house motif runs through Wolfe: “Many Mansions”, “In
the House of Gingerbread”, “And When They Appear”,  “Josh”, *The Sorcerer’s
House*, and *The Land Across* all feature these types of often sinister but
occasionally benign dwellings. (I think the house in *Free Live Free* is
intrinsically different, even though it, too, serves as a portal to a
different ontological existence).

I think there is a definite switch to fantasy in 1980 which has been for
the most part, except for *Peace*, “Thag”, and “The Changeling” (*Devil in
a Forest* has a realistic reading) absent in Wolfe’s work up to that point,
and it makes it both richer in mysticism but at the same time less subject
to structural logic.
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