(urth) Short Story 30: The Blue Mouse
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Tue May 29 23:15:19 PDT 2012
The Blue Mouse
This first appeared in The Many Worlds of Science Fiction in 1971.
SUMMARY: Lonnie is a tech with the UN forces, which has been separated into Techs and Marksmen, who actually fight. As they seek to put down insurgents, some of the native populace interacts with them. An elderly woman gives Lonnie cookies and exhorts him, “it’s an awful thing you’re doing, an awful, terrible thing. … you’re but a little lad and not responsible .. but if you’d seen the half of all I have you’d not be here killing our boys.” Despite her exhortations, she claims that all the UN force types are decent, and keeps feeding him cookies. She is exhorting him because of a tele program: “it says we does our part by tellin’ you it’s wrong that you should come here killin’. And it’s easy enough to do. … you’re nice enough lads, the ones I’ve talked with.” She does say that him carrying ammunition is quite the same as actually killing as the Marksmen do, and while he claims that they are mostly
transporting clothes, this clearly resonates with him to some degree.
There are approximately 1000 UN soldiers surrounded by 5000 insurgents, and the guide cable leading into their camp has been cut. Techs are supposedly psychologically incapable of fighting but there are always little assaults being aimed at the marksmen, and Lonnie himself engaged in one such “jumping” when he first passed training. Lonnie has a talk with his captain Koppels, who encourages him to use the gun on his truck if he needs to, because the battle will be won or lost by techs. Lonnie says that the Marksmen are the truly necessary ingredient, and that the techs simply can’t be trusted in battle, but to defer them for that would be ridiculous, so they are given technical positions. Lonnie reveals that marksmen are discriminated against by techs in everything from medical treatment to food distribution. His captain advises him to see the chaplain, and says if those abuses are true, they stem from “the quite natural superiority
felt by those who have difficulty in taking human life.” Lonnie begins to counter “We can kill. We could kick a helpless man to death. What we can’t do –“ but is cut off.
That night a missile strike occurs just after midnight. Lonnie (full name Leonard Daws) escapes the barracks to a situation with an armored car where a green suited officer orders men to help. Some back away inconspicuously after a nasty armor piercing rocket hits and mutiny against a rifleman barring their way. Lonnie runs, risking being shot by the Marksman Lt., and another missile landing summons the “never again” nothingness aspect of death to him. He steps on an insurgent’s hand and frees the flame thrower from around the man’s wounded body and applies a patch to his chest; he is not sure if he is under fire from insurgents or marksmen. In his conversation they talk about how both sides will have the same ratio of those who won’t fight and those who will, but that only the UN side will know who that is. The insurgent makes a very curious comment: “You think they can do that? Tell one lad has it and another doesn’t?”
This prompts Lonnie to think of the mice he bread, which consumed his thoughts during his psychological screening as well. He asseverates that studying their genetics has a lot of implications for medicine, and that if you don’t clean their cages they die. His watch stopped at two minutes after midnight when the strike began, but he recognizes that it is a new day. The insurgent tries to stab him, but he deflects it and warns him not to try it again.
Three tanks arrive for back up and he runs in front of them against hundreds of insurgents, until his flame thrower tank is empty.
COMMENTARY: Perhaps it would be worthwhile to look at all the different perspectives on war in Wolfe’s fiction, considering his attendance at a military school and his experiences with the Korean War, but actual combat or military scenes that might mirror some of the more memorable of his life experiences are actually not extremely prevalent in his shorter works, which often deal with alternate history conflicts instead, and it is very interesting to see the primary struggle these war protagonists face is often internal or based on discipline in their own ranks.
First, the world situation seems elaborate through small details – the old woman who gives Lonnie cookies at the beginning does not know which country his city is in, and he responds Sector 10, near Sector 9 and the Great Lakes. The other interesting factor is the phonetic spelling of the voisriit system – it seems like English is the universal spoken language but its spelling has lapsed into insignificance compared to accuracy and uniformity in punctuation. This has happened increasingly since the 1960s, and English really has replaced French as the common second language – but why is it phonetic in this UN ruled future?
It is surprising to me how often in Wolfe’s work the idea of hard determinism and fate seem to come up – free will is the necessary step to a fully Christian world view, but here we have soldiers who are simply put into two camps – those who can kill by their nature and be “trusted”, and those who for some reason cannot but are put in a more glorified but less “necessary” position. Yet it seems that these techs, “incapable” of fighting, often antagonize and bully the marksmen (who are usually small) and even jump them if the occasion permits – indeed, at certain points in the tale it is unclear if the techs are under fire by the insurgents or their own marksmen, and this kind of division speaks volumes about the effect of that segregation on a unified goal. What does the insurgent mean about those who “have it”? Is “it” a disease? A genetic propensity for pacifism? Cowardice? Do the mice have anything to do with
Lonnie being categorized as a tech?
The Wolfewiki claims the title is a play on the German decoration The Blue Max but I think there are several other resonances at work. One, the forces are following a “blue” rag or flag, the United Nations Flag. In addition, techs wear blue uniforms (marksmen wear green). As a “mouse” who is supposedly meek and will not fight back, Lonnie’s uncharacteristic “bravery” in preceding tanks with a flame thrower shows that he is in fact very far from a mouse. In this we have the old women and the techs acting a certain way because that is how they believe they are supposed to act, without any real internal conviction. The nice old lady LIKES the boys of the UN, but her halfhearted accusations condemning them are also ultimately true. She plants the seeds of Lonnie’s conviction that Techs can fight and Marksmen are a vital part of the army, but while she tells him about how awful he is, she seems to genuinely like him. The techs and
marksmen on the same side, on the other hand, actively dislike each other and will fight amongst themselves even when there is an enemy present in superior numbers.
POSSIBLE AMBIGUITIES: Ultimately many of these studies in Wolfe’s fiction work out of the conflict between the mechanistic materialism of the engineer and the spiritual freedom of the Theist. Was Lonnie misdiagnosed as a Tech because of his preoccupation with the mice, or is the entire concept of the test simply flawed? What is it that the techs can’t do that the Marksmen can? Be trusted in tense situations? But Lonnie behaves with extreme valor in the closing sections of the story.
I think that when the clock stops working it is a microcosmic symbol of the failure of this mechanistic categorization – free will begins where the gears of the clock stop functioning – Daws can act according to the dictates of his spirit rather than his “mechanical” hard determined character.
As a side bit of data one of the comments the old woman makes is frightening: something has happened to destroy “nationalism” and replace it with numerical sectors, and this UN force is called the Peace Force, but the old woman is concerned about filthy dark foreigners who have come halfway around the world to “drink our blood” – while this does not at all seem a supernatural story, that seems an extreme statement to make as far as occupation goes – figure of speech or literal vampirism?
Is this future without nationalism doomed to socialism? Did Lonnie kick the marksman he jumped to death after training? Is Wolfe on the side of the marksman from a didactic perspective?
NAMES: Lonnie/Lenny means lionhearted, brave as a lion – truer than his categorization as a cowardly tech.
RESONANCE WITH OTHER WORKS: While individual conflict is unavoidable, I would say that organized battle scenes play a much smaller work in Wolfe than in other epic or military fantasies (Tolkien, Cook, Martin, and Erikson spring to mind). We do have pitched battles in Latro and in the Solar Cycle, in Home Fires and The Wizard Knight, but the actual military feel is present in only a small percentage of his short fiction. “The HORARS of War”, this story, the historical interests of “How I Lost the Second World War …” and “Donovan Sent Us”, along with “When I was Ming the Merciless”, “Hour of Trust”, and “Bloodsport” are probably the most overtly militaristic. A bleak socialist future is actually MORE prevalent than the depiction of conflict against it – and I think that this is fascinating.
Next up is The Toy Theater in Island of Doctor Death and Other Stories.
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